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Thursday, July 19, 2007

hero of my town















on My kim street there is a hero, his name is Jim, he lives in 014 my kim 2 , he is 12 years old, he is playing top (beyblade, the top is made of iron ,people in china said: there are 4 super animals in the top , so they made a story about them , it is called the lengend of beyblade) in his free time, he practices every day , he wants the champion ship of beyblade. In the building in front of his house, there were alot of workers,they work very hard, one day ,the engineer goes to see the building , in the third floor there is a brick, the brick is going to fall down to the engineer's head , Jim saw that , he goes to tell him but it not to be on time, the brick it fell down, Jim used him harden's top , he shoot to the brick and the brick and the brick is broke . The engineer was safe .The police came and the engineer told to the police every thing , the police gave Jim for being brave , policeman said"what do you need,Jim?do you want money?" , Jim said " no , i just want alot of iron tops" and the policeman bought for him alot of tops


i like to be the hero so i buy alot of tops ,if I am in a situation like Jim, i won't want tops like Jim , i want money


5 comments:

captain america said...

hellojimmy your story is cool!but don't even think about money!

captain america said...

mickey: i wrote the comment above!

No Name Pro said...

Hello Jimmy.Nice to meet you.your hero post is interesting

†Jackie† said...

WOW Jimmy!Your story is very interesting.I like it. You wrote very good

Jon Hoff said...

Cool story Jimmy..! I enjoyed reading it.